feedback

Feedback:

Use of mise en scene
-like the use of the bag
-zip from bag worked well
-all worked well in combination e.g. book and writing
-book, writing worked well

Cinematography
-shakiness of shots work well and quick, unclear shots
-love the running shots
-blurred shots add to the atmosphere
-some shots didn't make sense
-like the scenes with very dark people and bright background

Editing
-6.15 clip could be shorter
-like the running scenes, good transitions

Sound
-like the static
-like the constant repetition
-static sound didn't go with the music
-very fast-provides hectic feel. I liked it.

Genre conventions
-we like the quick editing
-confused about black shot
-Good. Provides hectic feel. Quick.